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Another take at 55 fiction. Hope it interests my readers. She responded to his hungry gaze by spreading her legs. Quite a ravishing body, he thought. Soft, sensuous and appealing. Superlative figure, she thought. An exquisite pleasure. Aroused, he felt moist and hard. But he remembered. Sex, she thought. Hot and wet. No more waiting. "Goodbye," he took out his pistol, and grinned.

This 55 fiction is written for the cause of raising awareness. That tobacco is dangerous. It maims. It disfigures. It KILLS. His eyes closed gradually as he let his dreams, aspirations, and life out with the last puff. "None could give me such pleasure", he always said. "I feel free." Smoke to ashes, he transformed. Lonelier than ever, he drifted in the twilight hues. The sun drowned, spreading a never-ending gloom. He got freedom, at last .

Dear readers. I hope you did read my previous post, my first in 55 Fiction, "Why did you do this?" Well, this is the prequel to it. Read it and fall back into the imaginative world. Any suggestions/guesses are totally welcome. Here it goes. "Why did you do this?" - II "Why did you do this? Six years I was down the drain and now I get this?" "She is brave.. would understand.." "It's over! I'm going! Good Bye!" Back home, the mobile vibrated, showing an unknown number. "Hello.." .. .. "Hello..." .. .. " JAAN ..." The voice completely jolted her. She sat down in utter dismay. "Hello.. You there Ma'am?" Did you like it? Keep guessing. :)

I have had this idea of writing 55 Fiction since a long time. So this is my first try. Do read it and suggest some improvements or ideas. Note:- 55 Fiction infers to fictional writings bounded to a maximum of fifty-five words. "Why did you do this?" "Why did you do this?" The lady looked at his eyes scornfully. He was still smiling, with those mocking eyes. Tears flowed down her pale eyes. The grey sky roared. Wind whistled and howled and fluffed the window-screen hard. It scuffed past the room. She froze. From the top shelf, a photograph had fallen down.