Smoked to Death!

This 55 fiction is written for the cause of raising awareness. That tobacco is dangerous. It maims. It disfigures. It KILLS.

His eyes closed gradually as he let his dreams, aspirations, and life out with the last puff.
"None could give me such pleasure", he always said.
"I feel free."
Smoke to ashes, he transformed. Lonelier than ever, he drifted in the twilight hues. The sun drowned, spreading a never-ending gloom.

He got freedom, at last.

Comments

  1. asteria's canvassNovember 17, 2012 at 2:05 PM

    ive never tried 55 fiction, so i always admire the efforts.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anunoy SamantaNovember 19, 2012 at 9:43 PM

    Anything tried for a good cause demands appreciation. So, [clap..clap..] from my side :-)

    Regards,
    Anunoy Samanta
    -------------------------------
    http://just4suzan.blogspot.com

    http://imakemytrip.blogspot.com

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

My Love for Nature..My Photography

Image
Hello Readers. These are some of my clicks of places I have visited. Hope you enjoy them. the brahmani river road to daringbadi fisheries, chilika tiny falls along road to keonjhar after huge mugs of handia(our desi wine), two localites lost in a song inside mahanadi reservoir, a quiet moment with nature pradhanpat waterfalls, deogarh gudguda waterfalls sunrise at devrigarh lone boat on mahanadi, devrigarh champajharan railway station clouds kissing peaks, dalma - dimna koilighughar temple darjing, rourkela pandit feeding swans, koilighughar temple koilighughar stream, jharsuguda road to koilighughar koilighughar stream Lahunipada highway, rourkela the hirakud power plant, mahanadi basin mahanadi reservoir a pink lily in a pond, deogarh corn fields, keonjhar ganesha chandua, pipili tribal man offers lotus to the sun lord
Read more

Twilight

Image
I keep looking in the night stars I long something from morning rays I go shouting at the afternoon winds And I stop at twilight's fall Deep and then deeper blue the sky I keep looking at her, loving, As time becomes sedate and pearl Somewhere an old piano plays, adorns the air with beautiful notes She's dainty, impassioned and embracing all at once, with unforgettable flair All I wish is to stop time, for more I live to the next day when twilight falls and the old piano plays, yet again...
Read more

The Soldier

Imraan wakes up in a district hospital at Simdega, Jharkhand, recovering from battle wounds. The CRPF soldier is shattered by the violence he had witnessed in the battle with the Naxalites and now he desires to go to home and reunite with Jayashree, the woman he loved. He keeps murmuring about wanting a peaceful life for himself. When he meets a blind man there, he realises that losing something one already has is more painful than not getting what one wants. He writes to Jayashree that he would return, and one night he leaves the hospital through the window and leaves for the village of Rubed, his homeland. Back home, Jayashree is left alone to mend the cattle after her father died of old age. Being alone in a village under the active Naxalite zone, she is afraid to earn a life all by herself. A local foreteller sees a man walking through the woods and wishes good luck for Jayashree in the coming days. Her neighbours send a girl named Rubi to help her with her living. Soon both beco...
Read more